Review Help

[Crimson]

I need some help with one of my videos in an attempt to make them more professional

 

So far each of my videos appear to get better in terms of editing filming etc but I need some feedback so I can improve editing it's too late to change the filming itself

 

So the video is on private view mode if anyone has some spare time to give me some feedback please post you'r YouTube account name and I will add you to the list that can see the Video.

 

As per usual it's Air-soft related this one is a new line of masks

 

All I want is the video reviewed in 2 sentences or more something like that with ideas for future videos, and the viewer to look at my other videos and say if my directing has improved

 

Thanks guys